Live Blog #2: "The Monsters Are Due on Maple Street"

Today we are live-blogging and and looking at your thesis statements again. Your task is divided into two stages:

1: After you log in, type your thesis statement in to the comments section, just as you did before.

2. Constructively comment on someone else's thesis statement, using only that person's display name (example- display name, colon or dash, then comment). Try to include a positive, as well as a recommendation.

Live Blog #1

Author: please write your revised thesis statement.
Class: what is good about the thesis statement? What still might need some work?
Author: revise and repost your statement, using comments and suggestions from the class as guidance.